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Monday, 14 May 2018
book reveiw
Mr Stink.
I read the book Mr Stink
its a very silly book/story it is heartwarming its about this little girl called Chloe Chloe is lonely and at school this girl called Rosamund bullies her she even once stuck a sign to her back saying 'LOSER' but anyway lets get to her family her dad is like the only one who gets her her mother well she all she cares about is her and her little daughter Annabelle Annabelle and her mother are very posh people they sit on special plastic mats on the couch I know right how crazy is that?
but Chloe was walking Monday and she got up the courage that day to talk to the local tramp "Mr stink', although he was smelly Chloe was still his friend but one day her mum ran to be the local mp she had many rules but the very last rule affected Mr stink it read all tramps are to get off out streets and into another town streets but Chloe lied to me stink and said " hey! my parents said it would be absolutely fine if you come and live in our shed!" in which they definitely did not say they said the opposite! oh well, thank you! mrs Chloe, he announced. one day he asked for breakfast she was waiting one hour as this was the day her mum had the local newspapers around to interview her during breakfast so not knowing her parents did not know he came to the kitchen window and asked for his breakfast the new paper guy said wow Mrs crumb when you said to get all the tramps off the streets we did not know we meant to invite them into our homes! how generous are you to let this tramp stay with your family she took it like she knew exactly why she was here after they were all gone Chloe got up the courage to yell at her mum I took my stink here and you're taking all my work!. so whenever Mrs crumb was around people she acted like she was Mr stinks' best friend then whenever she was not around anyone else around that is except her family she treated Mr stink like you know she was the evil stepmother from Cinderella. well, I rate this book a 10/10.
thanks for reading
I read the book Mr Stink
its a very silly book/story it is heartwarming its about this little girl called Chloe Chloe is lonely and at school this girl called Rosamund bullies her she even once stuck a sign to her back saying 'LOSER' but anyway lets get to her family her dad is like the only one who gets her her mother well she all she cares about is her and her little daughter Annabelle Annabelle and her mother are very posh people they sit on special plastic mats on the couch I know right how crazy is that?
but Chloe was walking Monday and she got up the courage that day to talk to the local tramp "Mr stink', although he was smelly Chloe was still his friend but one day her mum ran to be the local mp she had many rules but the very last rule affected Mr stink it read all tramps are to get off out streets and into another town streets but Chloe lied to me stink and said " hey! my parents said it would be absolutely fine if you come and live in our shed!" in which they definitely did not say they said the opposite! oh well, thank you! mrs Chloe, he announced. one day he asked for breakfast she was waiting one hour as this was the day her mum had the local newspapers around to interview her during breakfast so not knowing her parents did not know he came to the kitchen window and asked for his breakfast the new paper guy said wow Mrs crumb when you said to get all the tramps off the streets we did not know we meant to invite them into our homes! how generous are you to let this tramp stay with your family she took it like she knew exactly why she was here after they were all gone Chloe got up the courage to yell at her mum I took my stink here and you're taking all my work!. so whenever Mrs crumb was around people she acted like she was Mr stinks' best friend then whenever she was not around anyone else around that is except her family she treated Mr stink like you know she was the evil stepmother from Cinderella. well, I rate this book a 10/10.
thanks for reading
Thursday, 10 May 2018
weekly reflection week 1/2.
Week 1/2 - Reflection
Some work I am proud of… I am proud of is my writing i feel like it is getting better whilst i learn.
Something that has challenged me this week is… is all the disturbance when ive been doing my work.
A school value that I have worked hard at achieving this week is… reflect because ive been reflecting every day after school ive been reflecting on my day and i was thinking on what i could have done different
A school value that I need to work on is… be brave because i haven't been trying new thinks and not taking on challenges
This fortnights Tōtara goal was Behaviour Matrix and I achieved/showed this by... being respectful to my peers and not causing problems.
What is my personal goal for next week?be brave .
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Thursday, 12 April 2018
Sunday, 18 March 2018
Week 7 Reflection
Tōtara Weekly Reflection
Term: 1 Week: 7
Some work I am proud of… I am proud of my writing because I have been putting a lot of detail into my writing.
‘Science in Van’ were at school and I learnt… that more pressure from the air pump made the chickens bottle rocket go further
Our inquiry is about geology and our world… I have learnt the the earth's crust is the deepest part of our earth
What is my personal goal for next week?add more punctuation into my writing
This fortnights Tōtara goal was Time Management and I achieved/showed this by… getting my work done on time like this reflection i have it done on time.
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Sunday, 11 March 2018
All About Me
Who is in my family/whanau? Caitlin,Emily,my dad(Tim),my mum (Alicia) and ME!.
What are my favorite things to do in my own time? Read,play on my phone or walk my dogs.
What do you like to do at school?Reading,writing and hang with my friends
What would I like to improve and make progress with this year? My math and handwriting
What helps you learn? being in a quiet environment
What stops you learning?people talking around me and being in a noisy environment
Who are my friends at school? Gypsy,Regan,Maddison,Lani and Pheobe
What was the best part of the holidays? being with my family and friends and just chilling out .... and going on my ...QUAD!
totara week 6 reflection ashleigh
Week 6 - Reflection
Some work I am proud of… my writing because i think i did really well with it because I used nice words and my next step is punctuation
Something that has challenged me this week is... my reading hopscotch because I've been working hard on it i just finished all the ones that didn't require a computer before i brang my computer in and i never got a computer so i didn't complete it
A school value that I have worked hard at achieving this week is…reflect because everyday i have been reflecting on what i have done
A school value that I need to work on is… respect because this week i did something i shouldn't have done
This fortnights Tōtara goal was Time Management and I achieved/showed this by... getting most of my work done of time.
What is my personal goal for next week?to be respect full and again time management.
Thursday, 8 March 2018
camp writing
CAMP DESCRIPTION
Achievement Objectives:
Purposes and audiences
- Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- INDICATORS:
- – constructs texts that show a growing awareness of purpose and audience through careful choice of content, language, and text form;
- – conveys and sustains personal voice where appropriate.
Ideas
Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
INDICATORS:
- – forms and expresses ideas and information with increased clarity, drawing on a range of sources;
- – adds or changes details and comments to support ideas, showing some selectivity in the process;
- – ideas suggest awareness of a range of dimensions or viewpoints.
Language features
Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
- INDICATORS:
- – uses oral, written, and visual language features to create meaning and effect and engage interest;
- – uses a range of vocabulary to communicate meaning;
- – demonstrates good understanding of all basic spelling patterns and sounds in written English;
- – uses an increasing range of strategies to self-monitor and self-correct spelling;
- – writes legibly, fluently, and with ease when creating texts;
- – uses a range of text conventions, including most grammatical conventions, appropriately and with increasing accuracy.
Structure
- Show a developing understanding of text structures.
- INDICATORS:
- – understands that the order and organisation of words, sentences, paragraphs, and images contribute to and affect text meaning;
- – identifies a range of text forms and recognises some of their characteristics and conventions.
Motivation:
- Write a description about one event/experience from camp.
Key outcomes:
- To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
- A variety of sentence starters
- A variety of sentence lengths - simple/compound/complex
- Edit and rework
- Effective peer checking and feedback
My draft and editing:

Published writing:
have you ever had the felling that your body is going to turn inside out no? well theres one word for it is horrible. Well coasteering is when you go down a very steep hill and then you sit down on a log by the water. You get the instructions and then you get to go around on a 2 minute walk across rocks to get to a less rough area. Then we went into the water and clinged arms together and went back into the water and did an american hot tub. Then went on like a 7 minute walk around and went past heaps of rock pools. Then to get to the little island sort of thing you did a small jump to get onto an island sort of thing and did a jump off the highest point of the island sort of thing which was like 10-12 meters high!.Well i did it and i got out with no cuts from barnacels.my reflection and next step: my next step is using punctuationcoasteering
Thursday, 22 February 2018
ashleigh week 4 reflection
Tōtara Weekly Reflection
Term: 1 Week:4
Something I am proud of from camp … doing the giant swing because I thought it was going to be very nerve racking but instead i was still nerve racking but not as much I thought I was going to be because I really liked it and it was very very fun.
A highlight from camp for me was … coaststeering because we jumped into the water twice one small one and one big one the small one was like a meter off the water and the second one was around four meters off the ground.
What challenged me over last two weeks? Doing my work on time I have been doing well with it but i think i'm going to use some of my totara token to get it all done.
How did I overcome these challenges or what do I need to do to overcome them in the future? Use my time wisely and be sensible about what I do in my work time so I get it done in the right time space.
This fortnights Tōtara goal was active listening and I achieved/showed this by… not looking away at the teachers at al times and not listening to someone else when the teacher is talking, I have been showing this by looking down at the ground and just concentrating on listening to the teachers
Next week I would like to achieve in class is ….to not talk to my friends all the time and get my work done and if maddison asks me how word are spelt i'm going to challenge her and only give her a couple of answers.
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